Well done. Id like to read more like that.
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Great dialogue, Ken! Very 'Twilight Zone'. I was almost expecting the cab to disappear.Keep it up.
I like your dialogue. It flowed, and it felt intimate inside of the cab. Excellent work.
Very atmospheric. Thanks for sharing this. I love your page numbering system, too!
Well done. Id like to read more like that.
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ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue, Ken! Very 'Twilight Zone'. I was almost expecting the cab to disappear.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
I like your dialogue. It flowed, and it felt intimate inside of the cab. Excellent work.
ReplyDeleteVery atmospheric. Thanks for sharing this.
ReplyDeleteI love your page numbering system, too!